Intro to Email Fundraising Optimization
• John Vandivier
This article will discuss several tools, resources, and data-driven principals which will help optimize emails which are sent for purposes of raising money.
Please note that while I do regularly send fundraising emails, I do not consider myself a professional fundraiser. Even so, the writers of the content I will be referencing vary much are professionals.
For starters, head over to my Infograms Page. There you will find a new infogram called, \"The Opening Line,\" #25. That infogram was created by Litmus, an email marketing and analysis firm, and it is based on a quantitative study of n > 200 million emails. They have many great results, but 2 of my favorites are as follows:
- Top performing email subject line length range was 28-39 characters.
- Including recipient name in the subject line (\"personalizing\") does not significantly increase results, and in fact shows some evidence of reducing subject line performance.
- Use a P.S.
- Ask 3 times in every email; once early or mid body, once at the conclusion, and once in the P.S.
- Use at least two \"hard asks,\" if not 3. There is mixed evidence that having 1 soft ask out of 3 asks may result in a marginal boost.
- Bold and underlined text can be helpful, but don't overdo it. Red is the only color you should use for text. Red and blue both pop while staying readable and not looking unprofessional, but blue is often mistaken for a hyperlink. Let your hyperlinks remain blue, but use red and black text.
- Be direct, clear and honest, not cute or tricky: Put your request clearly in the subject line. For example, \"Donate to Feed a Child Today.\" This will drop the open rate a bit, but will result in dramatic gains to overall response. From 4% response to 18% response in one experiment.
- Keep the email copy short. That is, the body and text of the email. Specifically, they recommend 2 paragraphs and a 1 sentence P.S.
- The value proposition of an action is a different thing than the overall value proposition of a good or service. This article goes over value propositions in greater detail.
- Every action must offer a perceived value which outweighs its perceived cost.
- A subject line should be clear. It should read like a sentence, be short and be instantly understood.
- The subject line should usually be point-first, sometimes point-last and never point-middle.
- The qualifiers must be precise. \"Get better results\" is not precise. \"Improve click-through rates\" is.
- The message must be appealing. It must be relevant, evoke urgency, and also be important.
- The message should be exclusive. It must have an \"only-factor,\" and brand name also matters.
- The message must be credible. The promise associated with the message must be believable and not sound like salesmanship.
- The value must be specific. \"Increase click through\" is worse than \"Increase click through by 103%.\"
- A message must have a complete thought and complete meaning. Short copy is ideal, but short copy at the cost of a complete thought is very poor.